CK Lynn

I liked it. Honestly though, you don't need to rate it R. Maybe just PG-13

It was oookay... Your puncuation was way off, which made it even harder to read. I don't believe I saw a single apostrphe. Other than that, the thing was way ...

Cool! this was really different. The only thing I didn't like was that there seemed to be several different voices in the piece.

Another prompt I hate are those way-too-generic ones, like: WRITE ABOUT AN ANIMAL, and there's no information what so ever. I think I got a C on that assignment, because ...

best story i have read on this site yet!!! fantastic, absolutly fantastic.

It's different. Not sure if I like it yet. As Elder Bobo said, what's going on here? Expand on that part of it. I really don't think kung fu is ...

Hmmm...okay. I get your point, sorta. But the poem itself was just to general for any real thought. We want information! Who is this person? What's the secret? Description! Imagery!

English.

I kind of dropped off after two verses. Really, this is more rant than poem, in my opinion. It would help if there was more of a poemy-feel (does that ...

I liked this poem a lot. There was one line that didn't fit, though, and that was "one chance is all I asked for". For some reason the otherwise good ...

Well, its not really supposed to be about fire, just kind of about how this girl sees herself, as this other being.

I really didn't like the rhyme, complete or not. It just totally washed away any seriousness the piece had. Other than that, I thought it was good but you could ...

I agree with idle muse. All the global warning stuff was incredibly preachy and "Save Our Planet!" hype at its worst. While the UberDirector stuff was good, James Patterson could ...

I kind of (this is said tentatively) like it. The title however, put me off since it is very, very cheesey. Change it immediatly. Meanwhile, in the actual poem, there ...

Yeah, I'd have to agree with the others. I can't really see what point you're trying to get across, and your subject is a little hazy. High school students? Got ...